Thursday, October 29, 2020

The Last Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a shimmering sea mirrored such scarlet sunset wonders,
The last of a languid day, left a sky of livid lavenders.
This calm, capricious, charming act, captivated with color,
That moved on monotonous, madcap waves, in midst of summer.
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Kostas Lagos 30 October 2020

Splendid poem Evelyn!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 November 2020

Many thanks for the encouraging words, Kostas.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 October 2020

Simply amazing and beautiful scene painted on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Five Stars! ! !

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 November 2020

I appreciate your kind words. They mean so much.

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Kim Barney 29 October 2020

Very nice, Evelyn, and what a beautiful picture!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 November 2020

I am very glad you like them. Thank you.

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Varsha M 29 October 2020

This is really beautiful. I am fond of sunrise and sunset and your poetry on this is just fantabulous. A timeless, torrid, torturous, twilight, farewell surprise; And the magic, magenta, moment was also mirrored in my eyes! ...this alliteration beautiful.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 November 2020

I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for letting me know.

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