Wednesday, August 29, 2012

The Last Dance Comments

Rating: 4.0

She danced with Death
A beat, a breath
Her soul in his palm
Still, she remained calm
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Milan Van Zuyen
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Hazel Durham 12 September 2012

A deep and powerful poem with great rhythm and style the darkness is captured beautifully.

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Leslie Philibert 29 August 2012

Like this, a good write with solid rhymes and structure.

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Milan Van Zuyen

Milan Van Zuyen

Boulder Colorado
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