Friday, March 4, 2016

The Last Courtesy Of Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

When death approaches,
nature makes him tired of all,
tired of himself, too,
he starts liking loneliness,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 March 2016

Verily, a true depiction of the psychology of an aged person

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Abhilasha Bhatt 10 March 2016

True picture of death with different life.......Beautiful......thank you for sharing :)

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Mithilesh Yadav 09 March 2016

wow...... babajaan once again grrt penned..... loved it .... till the last breath we take together.... doesn't matter it is who among us is first............. we hang in there with all our love, feelings and trust........ love your look still quenches my thirst.........

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 March 2016

Life and death! Born to learn and grow; with death being part of us. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 08 March 2016

And so is the life a dream that will end one day with a bang....Nice poem Janab..

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Abderrahmane Dakir 08 March 2016

Great poem that I fall deeply in love.'he gets peace in a total darkness'. You create this great ambiance to think about the most things that we could miss after the death.Thank you so much for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 March 2016

most of us r n line but this feeling is okay for gloomy men women never so think amen

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Kelly Kurt 05 March 2016

We all face that day when all we love will be gone forever and we are more aware of it as the time approaches

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