Monday, February 16, 2015

The Last Breaths Comments

Rating: 4.8

So you came at last,
The candle's flame,
In the winds of time,
Vibrated with all her might,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Farhan Mirza 18 February 2015

This poem was so sweet. I loved the description.

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Bisma Mirza 17 February 2015

brilliant Poem..... great! ! !

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Khalid Saifullah 16 February 2015

A heart touching expression through a lovely poem......................10

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Valsa George 16 February 2015

To survive for a moment, To have a look at you, And to kiss your lips, love remains till the last embers get extinguished! Beautiful write!

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