Monday, July 18, 2016

The Last Blossom Comments

Rating: 4.5

Among the last green leaves of the tree,
A little last blossom flutters free,
Like a dying man breathing his last,
Like a soldier slain in the battles past.
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Chinedu Dike 18 July 2016

Insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Fathima.

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Kelly Kurt 18 July 2016

Poignant and well written, Fathima. Thanks

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