Tuesday, January 3, 2006

The Larvae Comments

Rating: 5.0

the larvae
it has grown
shed its ugly days
crept out of dried brown leaf
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john tiong chunghoo
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Raynette Eitel 03 January 2006

This is your best, John. You have risen with this above a mere poet describing the wonders of the earth to a poet who takes us beyond the earth and all the wonders in a new place. Thanks. Raynette

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Amafred sew 03 January 2006

When I got to the last line I realised this was way above my earthly offerings - 'Well done - Nice Job!

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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