Sunday, June 7, 2009

The Lark's Song Comments

Rating: 4.9

I'm sitting in my room,
Crying silently as I stare out the window,
And listen.
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Rae Sinclair
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Paige S 16 June 2009

You obviously mean what you have written, and that is very important. Nice job!

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a heartfelt poem well done 10++++ As I look at the face, I see someone, Me. When it sees me, It gives the same start. But it sings on. Tiny and confident, Poor thing. But I tilt back my head, And let my voice, Take me where it may.

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Jerry Hughes 08 June 2009

...................delightful Rae, particularly the lines tiny and confident. Warmly, Jerry

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Carol Gall 07 June 2009

a song from the heart good one

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Fiona Davidson 07 June 2009

Lovely vivid piece Rae....10+++

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