Monday, June 20, 2011

The Landmine Comments

Rating: 4.5

he planted me,
desolate i lay
with no pal too
well! he lay me
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angella wangari kariuki
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Barbara Clafton 16 April 2015

very poignant. moving and immotive. I particularly like the way you gave the land mine life and a personality, in an ironic way, as it is used to take life away. very well written thank you for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 01 July 2011

wow...sent a shiver down my spine graphic painful and well written... this scourge needs more international effort.....just as the worlds police man lays more and more....sad... nice lines sat

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angella wangari kariuki

angella wangari kariuki

nairobi, kenya
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