In the land offering lush riches,
To care convey decent of needs.
Everything where flourishes,
And to harmony wide leads.
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'Him to devour crude with speed' - nice touch there...
you have unravel the truth.........well spoken words of reality...........10+++
To be honest chief, I haven't sucked much from the poem. I need more time to go over it, word after word.
Great contribution here...this is a true reflection of the 'Niger..' situation.
awesome write.... the problem and d greed very nicely told... well done...a 10++++ from me...
something to think about...well done, thanks for sharing
Neither based is the land in his wishes To boom, nor words bright does he heed Of wisdom. His worth perishes, For he clings not to light's creed. very nice words...........fantastic poem. thanks for sharing
a good poem on greediness of human being or exploiters. pls read my poem be kind to the birds and little birds.........
But politics by unreason ditches Edifice of progress. For greed, Runs the glitch that nourishes Him to devour crude with speed. great!
a problem so nicely told, but the greed never gets old. very good write a ten
I have read with pleasure... your poems very nice, and compassion and sensitivity... You should always write...
It is a good poem. written well and has nice rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for suggesting. I give it a 9.
Dear Mr.Obinna A very intressting poem, ...... Im really looking forward to take my time and read more of your poems.. ewa
brilliantly executed poem as are most of yours and i will continue to peruse your work a 10 from me, please feel free to read my new work - The Holy Land - and The sadness of sorro
An impressively executed rhythm with an enriched vocabulary and a topic that holds true in so many countries global, clearly an enlightened view. Marvelous work.
Humble to confessed my english and IQ is not very good. Are you talking about vehicles. If so it must be great. Or are you talking about politics it is very good. or both then it is wonderful