Sunday, August 23, 2009

The Land Of Abundance In The Hands Of Unreason Comments

Rating: 4.9

In the land offering lush riches,
To care convey decent of needs.
Everything where flourishes,
And to harmony wide leads.
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Cheung Shun Sang 26 September 2009

Humble to confessed my english and IQ is not very good. Are you talking about vehicles. If so it must be great. Or are you talking about politics it is very good. or both then it is wonderful

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Kefentse Sathekge 16 September 2009

'Him to devour crude with speed' - nice touch there...

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Eyan Desir 15 September 2009

Good write.... This is a ten

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

you have unravel the truth.........well spoken words of reality...........10+++

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Kelvin Karani 14 September 2009

To be honest chief, I haven't sucked much from the poem. I need more time to go over it, word after word.

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Adeiza A. 13 September 2009

Great contribution here...this is a true reflection of the 'Niger..' situation.

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there is a poet in me! 12 September 2009

awesome write.... the problem and d greed very nicely told... well done...a 10++++ from me...

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Estrella Baldemosa 11 September 2009

something to think about...well done, thanks for sharing

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Nikunj Sharma 08 September 2009

Neither based is the land in his wishes To boom, nor words bright does he heed Of wisdom. His worth perishes, For he clings not to light's creed. very nice words...........fantastic poem. thanks for sharing

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Vijay Gupta 06 September 2009

a good poem on greediness of human being or exploiters. pls read my poem be kind to the birds and little birds.........

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 September 2009

But politics by unreason ditches Edifice of progress. For greed, Runs the glitch that nourishes Him to devour crude with speed. great!

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Joshua Burgos 05 September 2009

I give you a ten my friend I like it it was very deep

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Louis Rams 05 September 2009

a problem so nicely told, but the greed never gets old. very good write a ten

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ZEYNEB SELEME 05 September 2009

I have read with pleasure... your poems very nice, and compassion and sensitivity... You should always write...

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Autumn Jones 05 September 2009

It is a good poem. written well and has nice rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for suggesting. I give it a 9.

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Ewa Espling 05 September 2009

Dear Mr.Obinna A very intressting poem, ...... Im really looking forward to take my time and read more of your poems.. ewa

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Maya Hershey 04 September 2009

wow interesting poem.. very impressive.. keep on

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Luwi Habte 04 September 2009

obinna my friend this is nice one too wonderful poem luwi

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Daniel Richards 04 September 2009

brilliantly executed poem as are most of yours and i will continue to peruse your work a 10 from me, please feel free to read my new work - The Holy Land - and The sadness of sorro

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Alex Gomez 04 September 2009

An impressively executed rhythm with an enriched vocabulary and a topic that holds true in so many countries global, clearly an enlightened view. Marvelous work.

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