Friday, January 14, 2022

The Lament Of The Evening Forest Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lament of the evening forest
Abandoned by the sun once more
To the flutterings of change on the wing
As sky-dot murmurations descend
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Phil J Hambling
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 January 2022

Thank you Phil for this lovely poem on nature and environment......Top score

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Phil J Hambling 16 January 2022

Many thanks for your kind words Geeta and best wishes

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 January 2022

I particularly liked the suggestion that forest to be left to its own with its inhabitants with peace.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 January 2022

A marvellous poem with vivid images of the forest, the approach of the darkness and the quietness.

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Ruta Mohapatra 15 January 2022

I could visualize night descending on the forest! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem!

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Phil J Hambling 15 January 2022

Thanks Ruta

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David Wood 14 January 2022

Exactly what happens in this inspirational poem.

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Phil J Hambling 15 January 2022

Thanks David

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