Tuesday, February 23, 2016

The Lament Of A Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many boiling hearts would languish
in the silence of deep sighs...
If my presence had not braved them
to open their hearts.!
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Jaishree Nair
COMMENTS
Dimitrios Galanis 23 February 2016

I like it too.I do agree with Kelly.Inovating the thought and the sense.

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Kelly Kurt 23 February 2016

A wonderful poem, Jaishree. If I may add an opinion, The extra exclamation points are distracting to me

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