The Lament Of A Nosy Leech Comments

the name Leech might be an improvement! don't tell her i said so. no warning on title! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bri's FORM FOR COMMENTING ON POEMS: [n/a = not applicable to this poem] Poem Comment Form As my shoulder I did abuse, here is what may amuse: A poem-comment “form”; I know it ain’t the norm. But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. So this simple form I have devised. Don’t look at me! Are you so surprised? If I use the form I MAY have more time … to read more poems with, or without, rhyme. After all, I can’t read and NOT comment, and if you must have MORE input ……….from me … send me a request ……….., though “more” AIN’T free. ============================================= A. I enjoyed it: Yes _x__ ; No___ ; I’m not telling___ B. I understood it: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not sure___ C. I enjoyed the: Rhyming _x__; Rhythm__x_; Originality_n/a__; Cleverness__x_; Humor/Humour_x x__; Seriousness_n/a__; Sensuality__? _; Humanity__? _; Alliterations_n/a__; Personal touch_n/a? _; Other __________ D. It makes me want to read more of your poems: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not telling___ E. The use of English was: Impeccable/good_x__; Deplorable/bad___; In between___; No comment___ F. Could use proofreading: Yes___; No_x__; You decide___ THANKS FOR SHARING. bri :)

A lovely entertainer with wiggly ugly leech, enjoyed reading it.