Tuesday, July 7, 2009

The Lame Gypsy Snake Charmer Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a hot sunny day at a market place
He bends and shakes his weak leg
While blowing the horny pipe.
Then the snake aims at his knee
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 13 July 2009

An accomplished portrait of a curious couple, tinged with humor and irony. I particularly enjoyed the lines: 'Though it's venomous they live together in harmony And their living seems to be an exemplary for those who grin angrily at each other for nothing. ' Your snake charmer certainly has a flower in his heart as well as a sting in his tale. A quirky little poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 08 July 2009

Another moving word portrait. Full of pathos. You write with a compassionate pen. Always your friend, Sandra

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