Thursday, January 1, 2004
The Lake Comments
Rating: ★3.3
The yard half a yard,
half a lake blue as a corpse.
The lake will tell things you long to hear:
get away from here.
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Karen Sinclair
04 October 2012
Lovely! when a poem takes you to a place as this one does, with thoughts sights and emotions, it is a success....tyvm karen
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Ray Quesada
04 October 2012
comparing the leaves to maracas is very nice! this poem is gentle.
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8/5/2025 8:02:01 PM # 1.0.0
A beautifully conceived nature poem with a smooth and steady flow of narration intermingling with emotions. Thanks for sharing it here.