Sunday, May 5, 2013

The Lake Of Life Comments

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I really have a good time with my wife
Playing, in what we called 'The Spring of Life, '
To haunt some creatures in the wild lake
Of the wide earth that'd make me fully awake.
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Alon Calinao Dy
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet 05 May 2013

This would make a very good sonnet, the rhyme sequence is close and it is a nice poem.

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Alon Calinao Dy

Alon Calinao Dy

Samar, Philippines
Alon Calinao Dy
Alon Calinao Dy
Samar, Philippines
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