The Lake Is Dying- -Part 1 Comments

i just a while ago Googled leech when at another poet's poem! again, a fine display of NATURE in its grandness and variety, AND a portent of doom for the lake! this feels like one of the greatest displays of fine rhyming, clearness in speech, and a fine story all rolled into one poem. of course it can not hold a candle to one of my poems! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ;) :) to MyPoemList it goes. with trepidation, i proceed to Part 2. bri :) ok, now i have to call my contractor and cancel the exotic wood paneling order.

We are making so many damages to the nature and we may be punished by nature. Scarcity of water and global warming is alarming. A wonderful poem.

Your poem paints a magical lake soon to be threatened and destroyed by man. Hoping man may halt his greed and save what really matters on this planet...10

Great imagery, nice flow..........Nature I saw from your eyes looks wonderful to me now......10.

Loke, you are best in your Nature poetry! The lake nestled between the mountain range and the clump of trees in the forest must be an enchanting sight! Unfortunately there is the premonition that something bad is going to happen to the lake! Enjoyed reading the poem!