Saturday, November 20, 2021

The Lake In Autumn Comments

Rating: 4.8

Red and Golden autumn leaves fall
Leaving trees bereft of a winter coat.
Moist lichens drip their beards down
Chilly weather beaten tree barks.
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GYAN ALOY 23 November 2021

Nature begins its annual wind down; a tardy Sun, now delayed, grows weaker as the days Shorten slowing the pace of life and nature To the speed of a somnolent garden snail....vivid picture of the season....i have enjoyed it

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 November 2021

Daily view and observations in autumnal season with all its activities, cleverly rendered in a poetic sense. I have enjoyed tremendously, dear David 5 Stars full

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Aarzoo Mehek 21 November 2021

Beautifully wrriten can visualise the whole scenario through your words. My compliments

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2021

A well crafted poem that expresses in beautiful detail the effects of the colorful season; autumn. The grip of winter is coming. Top Marks! ! !

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