Saturday, January 17, 2009

The Lake Comments

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My mind is a lake of ripples
Caused by past pebbles
That lap on the shore of my consciousness.
She was a rock.
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Jason Doyle
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Joseph Poewhit 17 January 2009

Life like the lake is full of ripples

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Michael Gale 17 January 2009

Great imagery here! God bless all poets-MJG.

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