Tuesday, November 24, 2009

The Lady Of My Dream Comments

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It was a dream, a dream i had
Lasted for just a moment but made me sad.
There she was, below the oak tree
The sky was blue and the birds were free.
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Ashwin Satyal
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Anup 863 25 November 2009

nice poem bro i really liked it

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Catrina Heart 24 November 2009

wow! ! ! ! what a wonderful composition of a dream..................

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Aditya Mudbhary 24 November 2009

A good poem mate... enjoyed readin it check out some of keats poems to develop more skill n check ma poems out n comment too

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Ashwin Satyal

Ashwin Satyal

Kathmandu, Nepal
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