Monday, September 5, 2016

The Lady And Her Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun has deserted my sky,
Alas! no beams will descend
To comfort me when a chilling gale
Causes the tall grass to bend
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Lora Colon
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Kim Barney 05 September 2016

Very nice, Lora. I especially like how you ended it. I think a good ending makes a good poem. Dark clouds summon rolling thunder, The wind moves with fearful might, There'll be no rainbow after this storm, The lady lost her love tonight

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 September 2016

The pangs of a lady who has lost her love have been narrated in an amazing and touching style. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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