Saturday, August 5, 2006

The Ladies Relax Comments

Rating: 4.4

The Tea Room,
with the chatter, and the clatter
of crockery
as each lady
...
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Ernestine Northover
COMMENTS
Melvina Germain 19 July 2007

Great flow and lovely rhyme, you brought the reader into that tea room, I found myself sitting there having a nice steamy cupper. Thankyou for such a lovely poem Ernestine.--Melvina--

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 09 August 2006

So where is this place? And how do I get there? Tea please... very nice write

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Tailor Bell 06 August 2006

Delicious structure and scenery. -Tailor

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Patricia Gale 05 August 2006

A splendid read. Fantastic observation.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 05 August 2006

YOUR NARRATIVE STYLE IS ENDEARING AND PICTORIAL...YOU'RE LIKE GENERAL ELECTRIC, ERNESTINE: YOU MAKE GOOD THINGS COME TO LIFE! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Uriah Hamilton 05 August 2006

Every lovely lady should smile and be happy.

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Con Nie 05 August 2006

Nice descriptive poem. Felt like I was there watching the ladies. :) Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Aj Cliff 05 August 2006

hehe i love reading your poems they alwsys amkeme smilegreat job! '

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Scarlett Treat 05 August 2006

We don't get high tea here in the Colonies, but I was fortunate enough to be served one once on a cruise ship, and it was totally lovely - chocolate strawberries, cream puffs and tea in the most delicate china...an experience I shall never forget, and you have just reminded me of! Thank you, my friend, for bringing back such a lovely memory!

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Duncan Wyllie 05 August 2006

Sumptuous delight for pallette of words, This is wonderful Ernestine No lumps, not too sweet Mines a black tea no sugar please! ! ! Love duncan X

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gone gone 05 August 2006

A tasty morsel, Ernestine.....fragrant.... most easily seen, heard and enjoyed.... Love, D.

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