The Lacerated Diary Comments

Lovely poem Matthew!

Remarkable poem Matthew, well versed. Keep up the good write.

Love the line winter smitten land and your use of alliteration path of pages! Nicely done! However, I'm an English teacher so I have some advice about your word usage (poetic license aside) : there is no adverb form of sulphorous, the collocation for imbued is with, not on and there is no such word as inditement, did you mean indictment? This is constructive criticism so I hope it does not offend you...it is well meaning.

I have nothing to say other that an awesome writing, it was a good one Matthew...it speaks for you If a diary can express your days and it really left reader with heartfelt read :) but a bit scary too hahahaha_Unwritten Soul

wow! a great poem! i like it, well crafted and well composed...a great write.....i like it. please read my new poems.

.... i like this!

Paints a sad picture, deep and concise.

Very good write Matthew.