The Labyrinth Comments

Words are emitting love here! Fine!

Love is very much a labyrinth that doesn't always take us where we want to go. We get lost in the beauty of it even when it hurts...Well done

Labyrinths can serve as effective metaphors for a range of powerful emotions. You have beautifully captured the idea of a labyrinth as it pertains to love. Well done

effective poem...I could almost feel it.

Hi! Read through all of your poems. This was by far my favourite. I realised most of your poems followed an 'error then remedy' structure similar to a sonnet. I found Wicked Love a tad too draggy but this was perfect.

A beautiful expression of blossoming love.

After carefully weighing all the pros and cons, there seems to be a strong undercurrent of suface tension that is plugged into emotional hurdles tugging at what the right connection and appropriate decision should be. It's a good case for 'basic instinct' expressed with any desire to feel displaced in your affections—if you know what I mean and I think that you do.

A well written poem about how love can be everything, thanks, Lynda xx