Wednesday, April 30, 2008

The Laboratory Comments

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i've been to the boneyard
with it's cold air and wintry breath
all wrapped in frost and held
the hand of a dead man cold
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Ben Partenay
lonliness
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Delwen Doyle 04 May 2008

This was a really interesting read - it conjured some unique visuals & I liked the repetition of 'bone' imagery Left me with a strong sense of a dar k& coldness. Something that stood out for me: you are going mad but only at the pace of the bones

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Ben Partenay

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Midwest
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