I struck the board and cried,
No more! I will be in this paradise.
The paradise of Kumpa's and graves,
Having steady looks and shapes.
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this poem of yours is a mixture of paradox and irony, it truly depicts what you have experienced in your life. The intertextuality in your poems brightens the charmness a lot. Continue writing as there are many people like me who like to read the voracious works of voracious writers. with best wishes
this poem of yours is mixture of irony and paradox the title itself shows how allusive the content is to understand the above poem one has have that blend of paradox and irony in his own life
this poem tells what you have seen and experienced in your life.good work10