You bought the kit,
couldn’t wait for Mum to clear the table
to spread its bits and pieces out
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From the not wanting to wait for the clearing of the table, what kid would be able? To the working in of the poem writing aspect at the end of the poem. I thought it a strong poem and enjoyed it some really strong images here played well with my memories from stanza to stanza
Possibly the best analogy I have never thought of. Superb M. t x