Wednesday, March 7, 2007

! The Kite The Wind Took As If A Poem Comments

Rating: 2.4

You bought the kit,
couldn’t wait for Mum to clear the table
to spread its bits and pieces out
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Michael Shepherd
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Possibly the best analogy I have never thought of. Superb M. t x

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fanniesson - 07 March 2007

From the not wanting to wait for the clearing of the table, what kid would be able? To the working in of the poem writing aspect at the end of the poem. I thought it a strong poem and enjoyed it some really strong images here played well with my memories from stanza to stanza

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