The Kitchen Failure Comments

Michael, What a phenomenal exposition that includes my favorite poets...ample humor and wit...keep up the good work....I think you could pare down some of your thoughts, given the context of what you're writing, Example: 'give me lovers frozen in aloneness'-the -ness throws me a bit....why not, give me lovers frozen alone...? just my initial thoughts. love your work, keep it up, friend. phillip