Thursday, March 9, 2006

The Kiss That Missed Comments

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I put my lips to my Hand
To blow a kiss was Planned
I aimed and Blew
But it missed You
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David Darbyshire
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Francesca Johnson 27 May 2006

Maybe it was an Australian one? Love, Fran the Fan xx

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Ernestine Northover 09 March 2006

This is a giggle David, a real chuckle of a poem. Great write. loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Patricia Gale 09 March 2006

Are you sure it was your kiss that returned or could it been hers? You konw woman have good aim on what they want! Patricia

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Simone Inez Harriman 09 March 2006

I like this one David. Made me smile. I think I have given kisses like that with a similar outcome.

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Gina Onyemaechi 09 March 2006

Comic and romantic at the same time, Davey. Nice write. You were never away? Didn't see any ditties from you yesterday. Sweetly, Gina.

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