Wednesday, August 13, 2008

The Kiss Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.7

an angel cries up from above
her tears get carried away in the ocean
in a dark room a little boy cries softly
at a feast dancers begin to entertain
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Abdullah Salaam
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There is always hope carried by the wind and brought into our lives.Humanity is capable of great compassion which brings joy.Lovely poem, very deep and it inspires.

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

A bit of wisdom and philosophy that makes me rejoice. GW62

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 August 2008

...well written......thanks and........10

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Fathmath Zara 25 August 2008

ur poem is awesome...i love it..

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Anna jonson 24 August 2008

yes.. all of us have pains and sorrows.. and they're too much to bare.. nice poem

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