Thursday, April 5, 2018

The Kiss Comments

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One on one, when lips speak with one tongue,
Whisper each to each as if in ears:
O let us forever remain young,
That in love, moments-like look long years.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rosie Bourget 26 January 2020

Kissing is particularly important in helping us bond with a partner. Allowing someone access to such a private space is a symbol of trust, and signals a willingness to open up your private self to another, something that can be truly special.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 April 2018

Having hug and kiss of wisdom is more necessary during the age of confluence. Both lips unite to give rise amazing words. This poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 September 2019

Thank you Kumarmaniji, I had missed this feedback before

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 April 2018

Aniruddha, such a lovely poem....10++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 September 2019

Sorry again, for not seeing this feedback. Let me give a belated thanks.

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