Monday, September 7, 2009

The Kiss Comments

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There was no kindness in the last kiss
The more common exchange is a hand
A brief comment on the sun or clouds
Our courteous words boring and bland
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Ruth L. Rivers
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Nikunj Sharma 07 September 2009

Me leaving us nothing in the end to gain By adding a kiss to what had been spent nice and poignant, thoughful and precise.... a poem that runs, lives and speaks of itself. Nice write Ruth...the end is mesmerising and has a perfect depth for the reader to soak and sink himself....in it

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