To these I turn, in these I trust;
Brother Lead and Sister Steel.
To his blind power I make appeal;
I guard her beauty clean from rust.
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very disappointed with the poor reading of your poems Brother LEAD pronounced leed! ! ! ! ! ! Awful!
The first stanza is rhymed Abba. This type of rhyme scheme is structured in the Italian poem rhyme scheme pattern Good use of equal quatrain of three stanzas. SylvaOnyema Uba
one on the breast one on the brain. great contrast