Wednesday, September 10, 2008

The Kiss Comments

Rating: 3.5

I miss you and I don't know what to do with myself
In a perfect world: I would be tracing your face with my fingertips
Bring your face close to mine, kissing your eyes, the tip of your nose
and last but not the least: your lips.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 30 August 2009

In the reducing length of the lines you draw the reader ever inward, intensifying the experience of such a tender and passionate moment. This is totally beautiful, thank you June.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 September 2008

love intense reasons blue thirst yet bestirs over lips desires never intones by the dream toche yet never denies even by distinction.............love never ruffles even right or wrong when betiding by benediction, well penned by the uimagery

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Ershad Mazumder 13 September 2008

Thanks a lot for this piece. More than 10 for you.

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