The Kiss Comments

Maybe you are his first kiss, and you should help him improve since you have kissed like thousand time before.

Loving should be an ideal that both partners would work hand in hand to attend instead of having a predefined mindset and the influence of the media.

This poem depicts the sad reality of nowadays. I think love is sweet when it is a surprise. But when you have your own picture about how you should be loved and how your partner should be, expect to be disappointed and unhappy.

...he has kissed my mouth. An octave stanza Structured in two quatrains. SylvaOnyemaUba

love this a nice poem

Reality cannot always attain the beauty of dreams aspired to.

Of all the comments below, David Wood said it best. Pretty much what I was going to say. Thanks, David.

this poem is so moving

Sometimes we tend to be so optimistic and set our expectations so higher in love and relationships, this is dangerous when face the real thing. Nice poem.

A very honest writing...rarely seen

This is truly delightful and sums up our expectations when they fall short of reality.