The Kiss Comments

Then the lips that you have kissed Turn to frost and fire, And a white-steaming mist Obscures desire: a very fine poem. tony

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful work of art.

s that Love? no, but Death, A passion, a shout, The deep in-breath, The breath roaring out, a fine poem. very true. tony

Won..beautiful Love this poem

nice nice nice nice

Sooooo Truuuuuuueeeeee

That is very true and a very descriptive way to descrive a kiss. It was a very superb poem!

SUPER FINE........................Poor flesh, sad bones.

Mmmmmmmh, now I feel all that......

A wonderful poem, Robert. Thanks for sharing.