Monday, March 17, 2008

The King With No Throne Comments

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Do you know what it's like to be alone?
It's like a king without a throne
You sit and search through and through
Yet can find nothing to comfort you
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Melvin Banggollay 17 March 2008

A great poem indeed with deep humor and methaphor in the harmony of melodic rhythm of over flowing words of wisdom and passion. keep writing and thanks for sharing. melvin

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MCKENZi : ] 17 March 2008

amazing! you explained loneliness perfectly! i would have never thought to compare it to a king with no throne. brilliant: ]

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Commendable Work, young lady...Intriguing storyline...clean, tight structuring. Keep that pen pumpin'! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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