Sunday, May 4, 2008
The King, The Willow And I Comments
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The king the Willow and I, one day
Set our sights for fun and play,
The king is my brother, the Willow a tree,
And the letter I belongs to me.
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Frank Cannon
30 July 2008
A fairy tale day retold with a fairy tale poem sprinkled with magic.
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7/27/2025 10:52:29 AM # 1.0.0
As a fellow Canadian, I appreciate this poem and I invite you to read mine ‘I Cannot Return’. As a poetry teacher, I must say the opening stanza is poetic genius. The thought throughout is wonderful. May I make a suggestion for the last two lines? The King grew so tired, the Willow leaned high, And we of course were left with a sigh. or And we of course must leave with a sigh. Adeline