Tuesday, December 10, 2024

The King And The Beggar Comments

Rating: 5.0

The king always had delicacies for his supper
And never forgot to finish it up with precious wine
The beggar mostly survived on a coarse meal
But was blessed with a sleep so divine.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Rajesh Thankappan 20 December 2024

Thanks for your appreciation and for reviewing the poem.

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Rajesh Thankappan 20 December 2024

Thanks for reading the poem and for commenting. Sometimes the best thing in life could be as simple as a sound sleep. However, this will be appreciated the most by someone who suffer from sleep deprivation!

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Fantastic poem. Very instructive story, told in simple language. Beautiful rhyme scheme. Enjoyed. Top score, definitely

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