The King Comments
I felt its fingers befor I saw its smile.
It tugged me gently out of my slumber smiled and embraced me.
Clothed in a clowed so white man has never known.
A rainbow about its feet and golden crown upon his head.
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Why the one, you may wonder. First of all you never refer to people as 'it'. He and she and they are pronouns used for people. 'Cloud' is never spelled 'clowed'. And 'my heart longed for' not 'long for'. These little details are important in poetry. Adeline
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7/29/2025 2:08:21 AM # 1.0.0
@Adeline...thank for the help...I will at once take your advice...thank you dearly.