Saturday, February 18, 2017

The Keys To My Kingdom Comments

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Most of my writing is self-exploration
I write for release, not for you,
Not my drift here to say though that you do not count,
I do hope that you like it, I do.
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Lorraine Colon 22 February 2017

I like the title of your poem. Our poems are indeed keys to a secret kingdom we alone occupy. Use these keys to enter, and soon you will get to intimately know the occupant. A very well-written poem.

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Sister Frances 19 February 2017

I won't hide the am rather biased towards rhyme so this poem is a winner and so cleverly written. The school of what's next is ingenious :)

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