Monday, March 26, 2007

The Key Within Comments

Rating: 5.0

“Open the box with the key within”
So says the sign.
Oh what a conundrum.
I have waited for so long
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David Taylor
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Marci Made 26 March 2007

Yes, you found you in there, your heart. This is soooo good, I love it....I now need to go on search for 'me.' This poem makes me feel warm and good......marci.: xo

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Ankur Shrivastava 26 March 2007

It takes more than a poet to write a poem as good as this one, a man of wisdom!

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Dee Daffodil 26 March 2007

Wow! ! A terrific puzzle...I like the thought process in this one! ! Awesome! Hugs, Dee

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Original Unknown Girl 26 March 2007

Splendid piece David, your work just gets better and better it seems! I love this one, so simple yet bearing such a strong message within. Great poetry. HG: -) xx

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