Saturday, October 17, 2009

The Key To My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cant stop thinking of you

lusting for your touch
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Melissa Marx
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Ben Gieske 24 October 2009

A good start: expressing your feelings. Bunching all that you had to say before being interrupted or stopping was a clever way of expressing your urgency to be heard.

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Eyan Desir 22 October 2009

yeah i hope this person dont break the keys to your heart

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Justin Unanue 19 October 2009

A very... honest poem. To you, the reader, and the lover. I loved it. But it also made me sad.

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Melissa Marx

Melissa Marx

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