The Key Comments

Nice poem idea, Randy, although I think it needs some work. For example, I was startled at the first line's " I have gave" which should be " I have given." Also, later in the poem, I noticed some forced rhymes, like " I did see" when " saw" would have worked much better without rhyme. If I were you (and I am not!) I would rewrite the poem in blank verse and forget about rhyming. I think it would be a much better poem...but what do I know? ? ?