Saturday, March 7, 2015

The Key Comments

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In High School,
We always met
Outside of her
Pottery class-
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R.Benjamin Abate
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 March 2015

A unique poem that signifies an irrepairable crack in a relationship and how u creatively related it to the cracked vase. So it ends in a wry wistful way but I just take note of the great narrative and poetic skill with which u crafted it from real life. Thumbs up. Great to read u again.

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R.Benjamin Abate

R.Benjamin Abate

Mattydale, NY
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