Monday, July 8, 2013

The Key Comments

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The beach swept away in the distance,
The tide as far out as could be,
A couple were laughing and playing there,
She’d cuffed him, in fun, to a tree,
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David Lewis Paget
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Lorraine Colon 10 July 2013

As usual, a great story I thoroughly enjoyed.

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..... W@king Up..... 09 July 2013

This is a sad poem: (but it is very good, and I can see why you wrote it. Even though the poem was long, you kept me reading. Nice work. -W

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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