The beach swept away in the distance,
The tide as far out as could be,
A couple were laughing and playing there,
She’d cuffed him, in fun, to a tree,
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This is a sad poem: (but it is very good, and I can see why you wrote it. Even though the poem was long, you kept me reading. Nice work. -W
As usual, a great story I thoroughly enjoyed.