The Kantaka Saturn- Part-1 (കണ്ടക ശനി- ഒന്നാം ഭാഗം) Poem by Prem Nizar Hameed

The Kantaka Saturn- Part-1 (കണ്ടക ശനി- ഒന്നാം ഭാഗം)

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Kantaka Saturn has been hovering above
My head since the day I retired from my service;
So I approached a philosopher friend of mine
Who is very interested in Horoscope;
The itinerary of Saturn is scheduled
For visiting certain houses including mine;
He suggested also some remedial scopes
To get rid of it, but all such things had been flops.

Finally, I decided to opt for my own
Suggestion to myself, which is affordable:
'To avoid the brokers and deal with the party
To dispute directly for any solution.'
So, I decided to have a discussion with
The hazardous Kantaka Saturn directly!

I made a mobile call to Saturn but in vain;
It might be busy Cooking some of the troubles
For me; Soon my wife came to me Complaining that
She lost the screw of one of her earrings somewhere!

I looked at Kantaka sympathetically
But it sent me the emoji of its blinked eye
For convincing me about its work in progress!

(To be continued)

(Composed with 12-syllable lines)

Friday, January 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: humour,narrative,imagination
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