Monday, November 28, 2016

The Jungle Comments

Rating: 5.0

a tiger roams beneath the trees
as stealthy as the night
the serpent lies beneath a rock
where death awaits its bite
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 29 November 2016

Superb imagery. You have created a perfect atmosphere of fear. Yes, indeed life is like a jungle when there is war. Without humanity, without laws, world is no better than a jungle where death n despair stalk.10

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Barry Middleton 29 November 2016

Thanks Nosheen. I grieve every day that the world cannot seem to find a path to peace.

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