Wednesday, December 21, 2005

The Jumper Comments

Rating: 3.5

He swayed on top of the tall tower
and braved a cold Chicago shower.
His bank accounts were in arrears
the biggest sum was owed to Sears.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 21 December 2005

Sad way to end it....just when he changed his mind...nicely done.

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Rusty Daily 21 December 2005

The Jumper, Birthright and Doc Frankenstein...all well written Rusty

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