Tuesday, May 30, 2006

The Judgement Of The Turtle Comments

Rating: 2.8

I saw a turtle smashed on the side of the road the other day.
Judgement came swiftly flying from above in the form of a ridged tire;
His shell was splintered into a circular pattern of triangles
And his body was crushed beyond recognition.
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Jack the Ripper
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BEAU GOLDEN 31 May 2006

This one shows promise. Will your BODY of work 'JacK' be posted with the head and arms removed? Or will u merely eviscerate the weak and helpless like your predecessor of the same name? You have a talent for this. Bet on it.

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Sid John Gardner. 30 May 2006

My sort of poem Jack keep up the good work. Regards, Sid John

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Francesca Johnson 30 May 2006

Makes you think, this one, of the imbalances of nature, the unfairness of things. I enjoy your poems, Jack, they are gritty. Love, Fran xx

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