Friday, February 4, 2022

The Joys Of Getting Old Comments

Rating: 4.9

Old age is a must for all of us,
But with it brings aches and pains,
My prescription list's getting longer,
And my stamina's gone down the drain,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Bharati Nayak 11 July 2025

The real feelings of an aging person have been so well expressed in this poem.Every one wants to remain young and energetic, but the hard reality is that we can not.

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Yes that's so true Bharati! Thanks for taking time to read my poem x

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John Carter Brown 22 March 2024

I know how you feel Jayne.

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Michael J Williams 15 April 2023

I definately relate to this poem!

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Bri Edwards 11 April 2023

for an OLD gal, your poem is pretty good. bri : ) 3 stars .....ok,3 1/2 yes, there's some humour/humor in this one. bri

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Bri Edwards 11 April 2023

line 2: 'come' instead of 'brings'? ? ?

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 April 2023

Think I prefer my way sorry Bri : )

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Bri Edwards 11 April 2023

'come' aches and pains

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Bri Edwards 11 April 2023

line 2: how about

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2022

Wonderful.... enjoy writing till the end dear poetess. Loved this poem.

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Rob Lamberton 02 November 2022

There is joy in memories! ! The older we get the more memories we have!

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Chinedu Dike 29 May 2022

An interesting piece piece of poetry written with conviction.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2022

Where has all my energy gone? I struggle to get out of bed, I search everywhere for my spectacles, ...but no obsession! Peacefully accept whatever comes in your way...a pragmatic write...top score!

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Kim Barney 06 February 2022

I'm old, but, oh, boy! It brings me no joy! ... Actually, I'm not that bad off. I can't run every day like Robert does, though [bad knees, hips and ankles].

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Jayne Davies 07 February 2022

It' me with a vengeance Kim, but hey ho I still plod along! x

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Jayne Davies 06 February 2022

Thanks everyone for your comments x

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Thank you dear Jayne, sweetest poetess ever! 5 Stars full score and myriad more. Gorgeous poem

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 06 February 2022

Old is must comer; none is runner avoiding this old- supreb

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Jet Streker 06 February 2022

As a dog I bark all day.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 February 2022

love your title - the joys of getting old-----10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 February 2022

cynically told, Dr. Geeta, but that makes the poem totally gorgeous

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 February 2022

But the old age has its own beauty, even though with aches pains & pills.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 February 2022

Oh to be young! To run in the sun, With the wind in my hair, wild and free, ....Good old youthful days!

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Nabakishore Dash. 05 February 2022

A very nice depiction of old age.I enjoyed the poem in toto, but the last line is very memorable.Thanks that you are feeling happy despite the aches and pains. Regards to you..

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David Wood 04 February 2022

I never grow old as I've been 35 years old for many years now! ! I walk, can run (if I have to) , cycle, have weights at home, do Shaolin qigong and yoga. Every little helps, as they say!

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Jayne Davies 04 February 2022

Well done David x

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